Jukjeon Writers

A collection of writings by Jukjeon Middle School English students in Daegu, South Korea.

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Desert Island

by Oh Jeong Sook

I will bring a long-living handsome(like a Siberian Husky) and kind pet, a very long and really funny valuable book and a piano with musical note books.(very long)
[1] I will bring a pet a pet because pet makes me happy and encourage and it can help I’m not lonely
[2] I will bring book because book is not boring so it makes time pass quickly.
[3] I will bring a piano with musical note books because it can makes my life fun and valuable.

1. The tree will have color branches so I can use that instead of pencils, so I can record my life.
2. I can swim in the sea. because the sea is clean and there are no sharks.

Desert Island

by Shin Yu Jung

If I banished to a desert island and I can bring only things with me. What three things will I bring?
First of all, I will bring a very thick book such as “Shake Spear” because when I boring I will read a book all day. When I read a book finish, I read the book again and again when the book will be worn.
Secondly, I will bring a very thick sketchbook so I will be scribble with blacklead or wood. And I will write message of rescue so I send to land. If someone will be see the message, he or she enable to rescue me.
Finally, I will be bring a big knife because I will use this. I will be catch fish and kill fish to eat. So I will always full.

What do I think about live in a big city?

by Shin Yu Jung

Today, most of Korean live in a big city. The country side has nice things but I think better to live in a big city.

First of all, we enjoy many civilization in a big city. For example, we can watch movie in a theater, exercise in gym, read and study hard in library. We can do these things at anytime and anywhere.

Also, it has many good facilities. For example, if you get sick at late night you can go to the hospital but countryside has big hospital at far from village so that someone get sick in countryside he or she get sicker.

Finally, a big city has comfortable traffic. We want to go someplace we ill go faster than countryside. Countryside has complicated traffic so when we go some place we won’t go fast.

A big city has many good, nice and comfortable facilities but the countryside doesn’t have enough facilities. Accordingly I think people better live in a big city.

Desert Island

by Kim Yea Jin

I will bring my pet, Internet novel, and dslr camera.

[1] I will bring my pet because my pet makes me happy, it makes time pass quickly, and…if my pet drowns, I will rescue my pet. Also, if my pet loses its way in the island, I will search for my pet. In that I will spend hours.

[2] I will bring Internet novel because Internet novel makes me not bored, it makes time pass quickly too. And will not even put out a Internet novel to read.

[3] I will bring dslr camera because I will want have the camera!..and…Umm…..dslr camera makes me joyful. Island, the ocean want to take pictures so it will hang in a tree. If I have these three things I will never be bored.

Desert island

by kimminjeong

You are banished to a desert island for the rest of your life. Outside of what you need to survive (food and water), you can bring only three things with you. What three things will you bring and why?

I will bring a robot pet, a woman cyborg and  a solar battery.

(1)I wiil bring a robot pet because if having the robot pet,I can play with it.

(2)I will bring a cyborg because I  can talk and play with her.

(3)I will bring a solar battery because if  it basks  in the sun, chages itself.  then the robot pet and the cyborg can charge, too.

Banish

by Lee So Won

I am banished to a desert, island, I and bring only three things with me but food, fire is I can bring. What three thing will I bring? well, I will bring a lot of clothes and many sewing things, and a grandpiano…
First I will bring a lot of clothes and many sewing things because my bobby is sewing so I will not be bored and I can make tent, clothes, and hat….
Finally I will bring a grandpiano because I’m not be good at piano but when I am bored I can play. When I practice, pratice, I am able to play well, some day…
This essay is when I go to the island but! I don’t want go!! I want stay here!!!!

Taro story

by Lee So Won

“Taro story” is drama in the Japan. It broadcast on TBS from 2007.7.6 to 2007.9.17. In the this drama imfortant actors are Ninomiya-kasnari, Sakurai-sho, and Tabe mikako. In this drama, Hero is Ninomiya’s part Taro. Three actor is going to the Icinomia middle school in the drama. Iconomia middle school come very rich people but Taro is very very poor. He is very handsom and good at study, so in the school student think Taro is very very rich!! Other two actors will be a friends with Taro on the future. I like music call “Happiness!” in drama. Happiness is singing Arasi. Nanomiya and sakurai are Arasi’s member! Maybe “Taro Story” makes me like Arasi!!!

http://www.tbs.co.jp/yamadataro-story/ ←”Taro Story”’s  Japan homepage
http://blog.naver.com/huming4u?Redirect=Log&logNo=150034611060
←Happiness movie

I will bring ….

by Shin Young Bin

You are banished to a desert island for the rest of your life. Outside of what you need to survive (food and water), you can bring only three things with you. What three things will you bring and why?

I will bring a puppy, a family album , and a thick comic book.

{1} I will bring a puppy, because I like puppies, and I have fun with puppy. Also puppy is very cute.!!! …

{2}I will bring a family album, because Family is my important people. I will miss my family. To watch my family pictures are funny, sad…

{3}I will bring a thick comic book, because I like comic books. Comic book is thick >>> why??!! > because only one book!! I have fun with thick comic book, so I will not be bored..!!!

What I Think About Computer Games?

by Park Hee Jin

Many Korean people have a computer and many Korean play computer games.  Some people have computer poisoning. In my class several students play computer games for 5~9 hours. I see them, I feel pitiful…(?) Are computer games are good for us? Personally, I think computer games are bad because it’s waste of time, It has electromagnetic waves, and if long time watch the computer monitor, you will one’s eyesight fails. I will try to explain why I think this is so.

First of all, computer games are a waste of time. Play computer games, Idle away one’s time. It is bad for my future.

Also, it has electromagnetic waves, so it is bad for health. the lectromagnetic waves exert a negative influence.

Finally,  if  long time watch the computer monitor, it is exert a bad influence for eyes. and you will one’s eyesight fails.

sometimes computer games can help people but in general I think it’s not good for us so we will shouldn’t do it.

Are computer games bad for you?

by Lee So Won

In korea today, there are many kind of occupation about computer. So many people play games but many times people play games so a few peoples don’t like computer games. I think computer game is good because It’s informative, It’s good for study, and it’s good for rest. I will try to explain why I think this is so.

First of all, computer game is very informative. Hunting, shouting, fighting games are not good! It’s not informative, waste times! but I think adventure games are very good!! because they are very difficult but when I find out a way play games, I am very happy!!

Also, I think computer game is good for study. Another games are not good study, but english, japanese sound games are good!! Well, when play the game, I can check my competence. The quiz games are good, too. In the quiz game, I can learn new know details.

Finally, computer game is good for rest but long time playing game is not good your health. A little time play game, You are must comfortably.

Some people don’t like game because make eyes bad, need money (some game)… but I think computer game is good for me!!!!!

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